Personal Statement and Admissions Essay Editing2019-07-22T01:24:39-04:00

Personal Statement & Application Essay Writing

Personal Statement Editing and Application Essay Writing for College, Graduate School, Medical School, Law School, and MBA

Personal statements, statements of purpose, and application essays should make a compelling case for your admission by highlighting your education, leadership activities, professional background, and accomplishments. We have experience helping clients applying for a wide range of degrees and programs including:

  • Business (MBA & PhD)
  • College (BA & BS)
  • Doctoral (PhD)
  • Dentistry (DDS & DMD)
  • Education (EdD, PhD, & MEd)
  • Finance (MS, MBA & PhD)
  • Health Administration (MHA & DHA)
  • Law (JD & LLM)
  • Medicine (MD & DO)
  • Medical Residency and Fellowship
  • Masters (MS & MA)
  • Nursing (MSN, NP, CRNA, & NDP)
  • Pharmacy (Pharm.D.)
  • Psychology (MS, PhD, & PsyD)
  • Public Health (MPH & PhD)
  • Social Work (MSW & PhD)
  • Veterinary Medicine (DVM)
  • And More!
Personal Statement Editing For Applications To Top Schools Such As
Time, Los Angeles Times, CNN, US News and World Report, NBC News, and China Daily
Admissions Consultants Featured In
Time, Los Angeles Times, CNN, US News and World Report, NBC News, and China Daily

Personal Statement Editing

A unique personal statement, application essay, or statement of purpose will help you stand out from the competition. Our professionals are capable of making your personal statement look amazing by emphasizing your professional accomplishments, academic credentials, and relevant leadership and extracurricular activities.

Application Essay
    • Personal Statements (Graduate School)
    • Common Application Essays (College)
    • Statement of Purpose (SOP)
    • University of California UC Personal Statements
    • And More

Application Essay Editing and Proofreading

Your application essays, statements of purpose, and personal statements should focus on your strengths, education, and work experience and how they have contributed to making you the best candidate for admission.

  • The “Why This School?” Essay Question
  • Supplemental Application Essays
  • Common Application Essays (School-Specific)
  • Other Frequent Essay Questions

Application Essay Revisions

If you already have a personal statement, statement of purpose, or common application essay, we can help you revise and edit it to ensure you have the best chances of admission.

Personal Statement
  • Content Suggestions and Feedback
  • Revising and Editing the Essay for Flow
  • Common Application Essay Edits
  • Proofreading for Spelling, Grammar, and Clarity

Personal Statement Writing Process

We have mastered the art of editing personal statements, application essays, and statements of purpose. Our admissions consultants can effectively market your educational background, leadership activities, and professional experience in your essays and maximize your chances of admission.

Application Essay Writing Steps:

STEP 1

(pre-session)

Send Us

Your Existing Essays (If Any)
Your Transcript & Test Scores
A List of Target Schools

STEP 2

(in-session)

We Will Ask You

Questions about Your Motivations for Pursuing Your Chosen Educational Field
(*Hint: “money” or “helping people” is not enough)

STEP 3

(in-session)

We Will Ask You

For details about your educational and professional history, as well as motivations and accomplishments (we will use them in your essay)

STEP 4

(post-session)

We’ll Edit and Proofread

A compelling personal statement with the information you have provided us that projects your strengths, educational and professional experience, and leadership activities and how they have prepared you for the field you have chosen

STEP 5

(post-session)

We Will Review and Revise

The essay after editing it to ensure it is ready to be submitted to the school(s) of your choice
Price for Editing Personal Statements and Application Essays
Initial Phone Consultation (15 minutes) Free
Personal Statement / Statement of Purpose (SOP) $685
Essay (Less Than 300 Words) $375
1 Hour of Admissions Consulting $275

Personal Statement Writing Service Benefits

  • CONSULTATION SUPPORT VIA EMAIL (2 WEEKS)
  • IN-PERSON, PHONE, OR SKYPE PROFESSIONAL CONSULTATION
  • 100% RISK-FREE INITIAL CONSULTATION
  • PERSONAL, ACADEMIC, AND PROFESSIONAL BACKGROUND REVIEW
  • ESSAY REVISIONS (NO SET LIMIT)
  • FOLLOW-UP MEETINGS
  • AND MORE

Personal Statement Writing Service

Our reputation in the college and graduate school application field is unmatched by any other company. SOS Admissions has helped over 17,000 happy clients and counting to create outstanding and unique personal statements, application essays, and statements of purpose. Our professional team members have helped many students secure admission into top colleges, graduate schools, medical schools, and business schools (MBA). We have also helped applicants for the Rhodes and Marshall Scholarships.

We at SOS Admissions consider your success our success, and for this reason, we make use of every resource we have to ensure your application is successful. Consultations can be done anywhere in the world via Skype, Google Chat, or FaceTime or you can come into our Beverly Hills office.

Call us at +1(310) 951-4008 or click “Start now” to complete the form and have our experts call you about your personal statement.